Blog #8

I am having trouble deciding which essay to revise. I believe that the Grand canyon essay has more detail and intrigue. I am also personally fond of my second essay and I think it has more meaning. There is so much more I can do with the grand canyon essay. During my conference Dr. Chandler and I spoke about all of the ways I can make it more appealing and how to narrow my focus. I am having trouble figuring out how I would revise this essay because I like the flow of it. I think I would have more of a challenge with revising the grand canyon essay. That might be my best choice.